4 files changed, 33 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/config.toml b/config.toml
index 4843f8d..4779870 100644
--- a/config.toml
+++ b/config.toml
@@ -23,6 +23,7 @@ highlight_theme = "subway-moscow"
 juice_logo_name = "Gradecoin"
 juice_logo_path = "gradecoin.png"
 juice_extra_menu = [
-    { title = "why?", link = "https://twitter.com/marysuewriter/status/1391264859774275584?s=20"}
+    { title = "why?", link = "https://twitter.com/fppf_gf/status/1465754756564099072"},
+    { title = "whyyy?", link = "https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YQ_xWvX1n9g"}
 ]
 
diff --git a/content/_index.md b/content/_index.md
index cbdcff5..036fc57 100644
--- a/content/_index.md
+++ b/content/_index.md
@@ -4,14 +4,17 @@ sort_by = "weight"
 +++
 
 # Welcome to Gradecoin!
-Blockchains are incredibly simple yet can appear very complicated, we will see how they work and practice programming _production_ cryptography code.
+Blockchains are incredibly simple but they can seem very complicated.
+We will see how they work and practice programming _production grade_ cryptography code.
 
-This server is the sandbox for the PA1, it's currently running the Gradecoin application. Gradecoin is the faux currency we will use to simulate a blockchain network. At the end of the simulation, the amount of Gradecoin you hold will be your PA1 grade.
+This server is the sandbox for PA1 and it iss currently running the Gradecoin application.
+Gradecoin is the faux currency we will use to simulate a blockchain network.
+**At the end of the simulation, the amount of Gradecoin you hold will be your PA1 grade.**
 
 **A quick summary**: authenticate yourself to the system using public key encryption.
 Craft [Transaction](@/transaction_docs.md) proposals and tag them using [JWTs](@/JWT.md).
-When there are enough transactions then you can propose [Blocks](@/block_docs.md) in the same way.
-Blocks need to be _mined_ beforehand using Proof-of-work, or brute force.
+When there are enough transactions then you can propose [Blocks](@/block_docs.md).
+Blocks need to be _mined_ beforehand using Proof-of-work a.k.a. brute force.
 
 Gradecoin offers 3 endpoints at [/register](/register), [/block](/block) and [/transaction](/transaction). You can only send GET requests to /block and /transaction without authorization.
 The server is programmed in [RESTful](https://www.service-architecture.com/articles/web-services/representational_state_transfer_rest.html) architecture, there are no `DELETE`, `PUT` or `UPDATE` operations, though.
@@ -35,7 +38,9 @@ Gradecoin uses 2048 bit RSA keypairs.
 
 # Services
 
-Please respect the system and others. Keep your request rate below a reasonable limit. Programming a bot is absolutely fine as long as it's not aggressively sending requests.
+Please respect the system and others.
+Keep your request rate below a reasonable limit.
+Programming a bot is absolutely fine as long as it's not aggressively sending requests.
 
 ## /register
 - Create your own 2048 bit RSA `keypair`
@@ -62,13 +67,15 @@ Please respect the system and others. Keep your request rate below a reasonable
 > `Authorization`: The request header should have Bearer JWT.Token signed with Student Public Key
 
 ## /user
-- Looking for people to conduct business with? Everyone is listed here! 🤖👋 are bots who are very eager to transact with you. I've trained them personally.
+- Looking for people to conduct business with? Everyone is listed here!
+🤖👋 are bots who are very eager to transact with you.
+I've trained them personally using state-of-the-art neural networks running on thousands of TPUs.
 
 # Questions
 ## This all sound complicated!
-- I've drawn inspiration from [actual Bitcoin transactions](https://explorer.bitcoin.com/btc) and [warp](https://github.com/seanmonstar/warp/blob/master/examples/todos.rs). The simplicity of the system is how little interfaces it has.
+- I've drawn inspiration from [actual Bitcoin transactions](https://explorer.bitcoin.com/btc) and [warp](https://github.com/seanmonstar/warp/blob/master/examples/todos.rs). The system has only 3 interfaces. It's simple once you read everything over a couple of times.
 - Don't know where to start? Gradecoin uses RESTful API; simple `curl` commands or even your browser will work! [This website can help as well](https://curl.trillworks.com/).
-- [JWT Debugger](https://jwt.io) and the corresponding [RFC](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519).
+- Check out [JWT Debugger](https://jwt.io) and the corresponding [RFC](https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7519).
 - Remember that you are absolutely encouraged to grab off-the-shelf implementations for every cryptography primitive you will use. You can start by finding a code snippet to generate a RSA keypair?
 - Check out [misc](@/misc_docs.md) for everything else you might be curious about.
 
@@ -84,20 +91,27 @@ Thank you! Please [let me know](mailto:yigit@ceng.metu.edu.tr) so we can solve i
 ## I hacked the server!
 That wasn't supposed to happen :( I did not place any intentional vulnerabilities to the system so if you cracked something, it was not intended. Please don't abuse it and let me know so I can patch it.
 
+## I want to contribute!
+Thank you! The code for Gradecoin and this site are open source so you can take a look and let me know if you have any improvements, corrections, typos to point out or whatever.
+Both documentation (this site) and code contributions are appreciated.
+[My git server](https://git.yigitsever.com/) will be somewhat ahead of the [GitHub](https://github.com/yigitsever/gradecoin) repository but I will sync them at every major milestone.
+
 ## Submission?
-At the end of the _simulation_, your Gradecoin balance will be your grade. I will also expect a unique client programmed in either;
+At the end of the _simulation_, your Gradecoin balance will be your grade. I will also expect your client for submission, programmed in either;
+
 - c
 - c++
+- dart/typescript
+- go
 - perl
-- rust
 - python
-- dart/typescript
+- rust
 - random assortment of bash scripts
 
 If your favourite programming language is missing please let me know 🤷?
 
 ## Can my friends play?
-Probably not at this point. I've allowed a couple of people during the testnet phase but don't intend to any more.
+Sure! They can get in contact with me until the end of the testnet phase.
 
 ## How and or Why?
 - [Built](https://xkcd.com/2314/), [with](https://lofi.cafe/) [Rust](https://xkcd.com/2418/)
diff --git a/content/block_docs.md b/content/block_docs.md
index 228277c..2eec2ac 100644
--- a/content/block_docs.md
+++ b/content/block_docs.md
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ weight = 10
 > Blocks commit proposed transactions into the ledger.
 > A transaction that do not appear on a valid block is not accepted by the network.
 
-Blocks in Gradecoin are proposed to commit [Transactions](@/transaction_docs.md) that were proposed previously to the system.
-`transaction_list` of the Block should be filled with valid transactions to be committed.
+We use Blocks to commit proposed [Transactions](@/transaction_docs.md) to the ledger in order to realize them.
+`transaction_list` of the Block is filled with valid transactions.
 Blocks are valid when they are proposed with a `nonce` that produces a `hash` value with 6 zeroes (24 bits) at the left hand side.
 
 We are _mining_ using [blake2s](https://www.blake2.net/) algorithm, which produces 256 bit hashes.
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ If the resulting hash is valid, then you can create a `Block` JSON object with t
 Fill this with the `hash` value you found during the mining process.
 
 # Block Rules
-- Blocks should include some minimum number of transactions.
+- Blocks have to include a minimum number of transactions.
 - Blocks cannot have duplicate transactions.
 
 # References
diff --git a/templates/index.html b/templates/index.html
index d255b71..9dba13b 100644
--- a/templates/index.html
+++ b/templates/index.html
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
         Mine your own grades
     </h1>
     <h3 class="title-text">
-        <b>Gradecoin</b> is the latest cutting edge blockchain technology agile grading framework that drives organic engagement and other buzzwords, with big data mining search engine optimization (now supporting NFTs)
+        <b>Gradecoin</b> is the latest cutting edge blockchain technology agile grading framework that drives organic engagement powered by distributed neural networks and other buzzwords, with big data mining search engine optimization (now supports NFTs)
     </h3>
     <div>
     </div>
@@ -32,6 +32,6 @@
 
 {% block footer %}
 <footer>
-Built For ⁂ CENG489 ⁂ Introduction to Computer Security
+Built For CENG489 Introduction to Computer Security
 </footer>
 {% endblock footer %}